Promise me, if ever I make it as far as the pearly gates, that youll plead my case. So, she says, we have reason to believe that Jack is still alive, and were putting together a mission to get him back.. So, you dont think we can rely on Hetty. Purposely using we to remind him that, whatever happened, they would go through it together. It was the only picture he had of his mom, the one he thought he had lost. Because Hetty had raised all of her young charges in service to a higher cause, even when serving that cause might prove costly to them. What if that part of his family history ran much more deeply than he knew? Which was the crux of the matter, after all. Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Loved this story. He knew exactly what she meant. Sonofabitch.. aslycsi1315 for one, admits to a certain degree of impatience that prompted her to move her Densi forward. I survived and were celebrating our love with all the trimmings.. I mean, he cant undo the past.. (LogOut/ They arent too much, and I love them, because you do. And Im too old to haze anybody. How does your improvisation processwork? I didnt send him in there to burn down the building and blow up the Navys munitions.. 9-1-1 (TV), S.W.A.T. Look, I love Hetty, and Im grateful beyond what I can say for how my life has changed since I met her. Reaching over to squeeze the hand of his number one reason for gratitude. Many years ago, after shed drawn him into the circle of her team, hes shared a secret with Hetty or, more correctly, she had discerned his secret and shared it back with him. It was it was that time you were shot. While we've done our best to make the core functionality of this site accessible without javascript, it will work better with it enabled. But, I wanted it to be more special than candy and flowers.. My guys? Maybe a lot of it. It suits you. The most frustrating part was not including ALL my favorite writers, but unfortunately I had to limit it to something relatively manageable. Her goal in writing them, she says, has always been to put Deeks and Kensi together in as realistic a way as possible. Wherever Im going, Im going with you, who I know. Even if they dont want to admit even to themselves. I dont know why, but I have never given the second thought about Deeks father. Kensi glanced up at Deeks, he had placed his bag down at . Glad it didnt go too far afield! She immediately knew his thoughts were turning back to that of his father. Of course. A pregnancy test?. A deep blue, not filled with love, but filled with anger and pain. I told hdawg in my comment about her birthday fic that I love those sleepy morning scenes that she and other writers give us and those are just one example this domestic Densi that I love. I dont have idea how I havent noticed this story. Hah! He watched as her thoughts turned inward, her eyes suddenly watering with tears. Sorry I stunk up the day., Youre alive, baby, she said, wrapping her arms around himagain. So lets live life to the fullest, Kens. But you wont be. (TV 2017), NCIS: Los Angeles, , Bones (TV) Not Rated. Callen asked. Youre my world. It was how hed reacted, after their first night together, when he hadnt taken a shot, fearful that it could have put her in danger. Cant go wrong with that., Thats exactly it. He needed that so I gave it to him. Tess DiCorsi thinks there are more reasons for them to be together than apart. Something like that, Deeks replied. Romance at your Service: Deeks Surf Log4/23/23. She might tell you the truth.. And? The things we do have consequences just as much as those things we dont do.Episode Tag for S13.E5 Divided We Fall. But he was wrong. He slumped next to him and instantly felt the pain . Neither of them had expected the vehemence behind his words, and each spent a long moment staring out toward the ocean in recovery. What does that mean?. # 15. Hes joking, right? Deeks stammered. Tears gathered in his eyes as he looked at this amazing woman who, for the second time, had agreed to marry him. Youre hazing the new guy?, Youre too old to be the new guy, Deeks, Callen said. Maybe I spent too much of my childhood alone with my dad. I can tell somethings still eating at you. Before he could respond and, mostly because she could see that he was not about to she added, Was it the baby stuff? Finally, a taxi pulled up and a dark haired woman got out; an exasperated look on her face. There was no time for decision-making, or regret, or remorse, on either end of a snipers weapon. Your public profile has probably been wiped.. Until the night Hetty had shown up at the hospital, after Kensi had been so gravely injured in Syria. Is there something wrong with that? Diane | Founder, Writer, & Contributing Editor, Follow wikiDeeks | Marty Deeks | NCISLA on WordPress.com. I dont know. Buck and Street are together for years now. Would he want me to forgive him? So its not enough to just give you candy and flowers., I think youre hallucinating, baby, she said with a concerned smile. Will we see follow-up from Densis Season 9 argument? I just cant we just do your family history? I guess its safe to tell you now that, knowing I would have no time for it in the week following the episode, I actually wrote this before it aired, just based on the title. He rubbed his hands together and anxiously looked at all the cars, wondering which one was theirs. t I was supposed to regret it. Im done not talking about it., His gaze remained steady on her face. He wouldnt let Bertie derail every conversation with her chatter, and he wouldnt get sucked into whatever was the most recent drama in her life. Instead, he's offered a job. And Ive been in love with it all ever since. And I dont think she did, either. This mornings conversation with Kensis friends hadnt created his dilemma. Hed been too intrigued, and maybe too enchanted, to say no to her. Id like to see her stand up to a Gordon Brandel who shows up on their doorstep one night, and to see them both let Hetty have it for lying to them (again). It had taken him a much longer time to share that same secret with the woman he would love into eternity. I just dont want to be late for brunch. She doesnt not outright. NCIS: Los Angeles (2381) NCIS (219) Hawaii . Completed. I was always Martin Atticus Deeks. Hoping that it wasnt actually the devil she was advocating for. Just for being. Always enjoy hearing from these great writers! And she probably wouldnt have had any trouble getting into my sealed juvenile records, either., Kensi was beginning to understand. I go back and forth between them being together covertly or having the team aware of whats going on but letting Deekss and Kensis business be Deekss and Kensis business. Kadiedid describes a similar storyline: I thought it would be rather funny for them to be together and then have to go through all kinds of issues trying to keep it a secret. Its not the history, and its not the relatives. Bingo, he whispered, grinning until he saw one of the bad guys grab a weapon from one of the cases. You two just back off for one damn minute, Kensi demanded. We can only hope and keep writing. Probationary NCIS Agent Jana 'Kerigan' MacBride has been assigned to the Office of Special Projects in Los Angeles. wikiDeeks is a non-profit fan site devoted to the character Marty Deeks of the hit CBS television show, NCIS: Los Angeles. Glad it got the ECO seal of approval! Besides, Im an NCIS Investigatoragent person now.. His strokes were deliberate, his choice of wave careful, no hint of recklessness in his ride. What if he had a boyfriend? Made an interesting story for TV though. He was supposed to be the optimist in their relationship, and here she was taking over the role. If hes submitted his information., Deeks shrugged again. ncislosangelesfanfic. I dont know what were getting into with this, not with the families we came from, and not with the one we want to make. I will never understand what takes you so long. Yes, I did, didnt I? Because I know Cat can get carried away when shes talking about it. I have found it only now and I am so glad for that. The NCIS spin-off is considering whether or not to bring children into the mix for Kensi and Deeks, with showrunner R Scott Gemmill telling TVLine that the question of the couple falling. Thats why I was so good at undercover. She works with NCIS Special Projects. I have a mother who loves me, and whom I love. Kensi felt the rise and fall of his chest as Deeks heaved a huge sigh. . We have the best fanfic writers around! # 1. I dont know, I dont know, and yes, you idiot.. And if youre worried about how it affected me, dont be. Neither of our moms is in a position to fill in the gaps, so I thought it would help.. So what did you get me?, All those descriptive terms of endearment not enough for you, yeah?, I know I said I didnt need anything, but a girl likes candy and flowers every once in a while., You mean I could have gotten off cheap with a box of Twinkies and some tulips?, Are you saying you really did make big plans?. I mean, its not an all-or-nothing deal, right?, No, of course its not. Giving his wife the concession he thought she would want. Thank you for writing it! Deeks was bouncing on his heels with excitement as he waited by his car. New badge or not., Deeks. They can only hope that they'll still be alive when he's through with them. I cant bring myself to believe the Nellster would have lied to me about something like that, but it doesnt mean she didnt find something she was meant to find., Kensi understood. Two men suddenly stumbled out the door of the small office, arguing loudly and shoving one another. Not that I could guarantee that either of us would want to meet them., Aw, babe, that would mean our kids could have an aunt or an uncle. And it has occurred to me that I might have a half-sibling or two out there as well. And then it made me wonder something else., I wondered why she chose me. One that just so happens to give him a brand new opportunity to flex his undercover skills. Not these front lines.. Thanks for writing. He had called Kensi from the car and had enjoyed her blistering remarks about Callen sending him out on Valentines Day, especially with Artie in tow. Getting shot wasn't that bad in th. imahistorians Densi has undergone these transitions in a trilogy of stories. All images copyright their respective owners, no infringement intended. What if Buck killed Doug? Sing-song-y response. I write Fan Fiction under the name Sweet Lu. I want to talk about it. How did I find out that my father was dead?, Her eyes remained narrowed. Hetty shoots one of them, but they know they will keep coming, so Hetty and Owen have to hide out in a safe house together. I love domestic Densi so so much. Pressing his lips to the smooth area of skin at the juncture of Kensis neck and shoulder, Deeks rested his hands on her hips as he closed his eyes and simply breathed her in. No. Not having to say aloud that it would probably have been futile. Then hed realized that she was angry because she was afraid that their new situation had been handling him. Id say my Densi relationship is a much more developed one since they are married with children and also older than they presently are on the show. But what if we cant? NCIS Los Angeles' Marty Deeks (played by Eric Christian Olsen) and Kensi Blye (Daniela Ruah) have been together for years so fans were in tears when they finally made it official and got. Isnt it noble to raise your kids to care?, Whoa, hold on. ncisfanfiction. Sweet Lu explains, It was only during my last story did I get into their conversation about what the future might hold. Deeks looked out toward the ocean depth that had always been able to absorb his angst, willing it to do so now. Contact us if you are the owner of something and you would like it removed. She laughed as the boat pulled away and he drew her to the railing where they enjoyed their champagne. I am really grateful WikiDeeks has very talented fanfiction writers, its always a pleasure to read your stories. He couldnt have said if he was just taking a moment to collect his thoughts or if he was actually looking for wisdom in the photons. You sent her there, remember? But the state of their family had been paramount in each of their minds. All images copyright their respective owners, no infringement intended. Marty Deeks walked into the NCIS OPS seeing Callen and Sam argue on their daily debate which his partner, Kensi would join into. Just youalive and breathing., Breathing is good. Its been a long time since Ive had someone who has as much faith in me as I have in them., It seems that, like us, our writers just want Deeks (and Kensi) to be happy. Keeping up the great tradition of answering questions with more questions. Okay, so they agree on the fact that hes an idiot. Next time were changing things up a bit. deeks ncis densi +3 more # 14 Love Forever by ncis4life 22.2K 730 22 densi fan fiction densi love ncisla +1 more # 15 I think you captured Deeks and Kensis voices so well. Not without a reason, I agree with that. But is that what happened?. Whatwhy? No one would suspect there was anything inside worth stealing. Because thats where criminals store stolen Navy munitions, Sam said in an irritating singsong voice. Idiot. Definitely not an agreement. I also loved how supportive Kensi was throughout. At least I always knew she was there. (LogOut/ Instinctively, hed always seen Bertie as a protective presence, even when shed been so woefully unable to protect him. 7.9K 117 14. You had no idea what was going on, you just kept going with the flow. To both of us. He blew out a breath and tried again. I always try to write them getting together, because to me, thats something very fun to read. Can you tell us more about your first day at work onNCISLA? Change). Whats your favorite NCISLA Christmasepisode? What can we expect for Densi in BetterAngels? I keep a distance, because I can. You already know how I feel about it. They met on a case 7 years ago when LAPD and NCIS worked together. You know, I dont think I ever really considered that we might end up with a bunch of Brandels showing up at the door, but now that you mention it, yes, I guess Im afraid of that., Doubtful. Thanks to all for the kind feedback, and for tolerating the fact that I didnt actually answer the question. And maybe a long shower. Awesome as per usual. I loved this fanfiction, thanks for writing it. What the hell happened in there, Deeks? Sam asked. But she was wrong. Shed been there every visitors hour, and shed fought tooth and nail to get him out. I took that he was dead as an indisputable fact, but even if he is not I do not see the reason for Deeks to look for him or his half-siblings. She thought I was supposed to regret it. Kensi Blye-Deeks sounds much better than Kensi Blye-Brandel. When and where?. Chapter one: Precursor to an idea I had when re-watching Casino Royale and Skyfall. He reached down for her hand, and pulled her up. And both of those things make you different from him. Which means that Gordon Brandel might still be out there somewhere. Deeks saved Kensi from having a completely one-sided conversation. Who knew? Because it really might be kind of cool. {NCIS LA fanfic} by Sanne. But, faced with the very real possibility of a pregnancy, faced with the option of a real child, and not the ignoring of a theoretical one, might she have changed her mind? The man raised the grenade launcher to his shoulder just as the other man slammed into him, sending the projectile into the ceiling above Deeks head. You carefully took into account the information we do have and explored all the reasons why Hetty might have hidden the truth from Deeks. Deeks had to think about what it all might mean. They needed a next of kin, so Hetty looked into it, and, And Hetty told me he was dead. How can we help fire victims? Okay, then. What if he hasnt? That Heritage website? Your email address will not be published. Frustration. I think especially on a procedural show like NCIS:LA, where we skip over so much of the characters personal lives, fan fiction has a huge role to play to fill all those gaps, both big small. It was like Christmas, there was so much to enjoy there. What do you most admire aboutDeeks? # 16. Kensi was glad to see that Deeks apparent turmoil was not showing itself in the water. They dont have to put their souls at risk, every day. Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. HeyI am not going to a hospital today. Their pasts are part of who they are but shouldnt define their futures. Owen and Hetty are targeted by a group that has been trying to get to them for years. I think every child yearns for the love and approval of their parents. What can we expect for Densi in Better Angels? He encouraged her of course, and had wished Callen and Sam could hear her descriptive threats of bodily harm. Listen, you know I love Hetty, but Im also not looking at her through rose-colored glasses. What kind of journey can we expect for Deeks in Season10? His eyes went to hers, and then away again, gathering courage. Hetty? Diane | Founder, Writer, & Contributing Editor, Follow wikiDeeks | Marty Deeks | NCISLA on WordPress.com. I just wanted to see you, he murmured against her skin, but despite the lack of volume in his voice, Kensi still caught the underlying tone that suggested greater meaning to his words. As soon as Deeks had heard Callen's panicked voice, two images flashed through his mind: Kamran and Aiden, and Sam crying and holding his wife's body, and without even thinking of himself or his own dreams and family, moved as fast as he ever remembered doing, pushing his senior teammate down. What if he was also a doctor? I already wrote here on this site that I am immensely happy that we met Roberta and learned how much she loves and is proud of her son. Maybe for the first time in my life, I dont have a plan past tomorrow and it is awesome, Kensis smile was glorious. Two writers named stories that include Densi in an established relationship. Shed been mightily angry with him then. Not so with Callen. . Once she could speak again, Kensi had a question for him. I absolutely love your take on whether Deeks father could still be alive. Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Ditto all the above. After that, hed been confused. Now, he knew. The two senior agents laid out the case, which seemed like a no-brainer except for the location and the fact that he would have little overwatch once he was inside the abandoned warehouse. So what, then? Im not going to subject them to what I went through.. Safehouses. I also liked your twist on why his last name is Deeks. He retorted, But what about that dating app you were on? She reached for his hand through the smoke, shouting his name. No, my love. Tony Dinozzo is brought back to NCIS five years after leaving and finds himself caught in a war unlike any other. Thanks hdawg! Deeks squinted into the distance and spotted a pod of dolphins playfully jumping out beyond a line of surfers. But the time hasnt come yet.. One of my stories has them hiding and making out in the storage room and almost getting caught by Hetty.. This is not what I wanted for Valentines Day., Me either, he replied as shepushedhim toward the ambulance. I mean, I know theyre a bit much, especially when theyre all together. Contact us if you are the owner of something and you would like it removed. Wonderful Article! In the end she never pretended to be different. It was because she was impressed with how deeply youd penetrated them. Not necessarily married with kids (though some of those stories are great too), but just them, at home, guards down, not worried about hiding from the team, etc. Posted on September 19, 2021 by amusement345 in Fan Fiction // 9 Comments. It wouldnt have been hard for Hetty to find out about what happened when I was a kid. Even when she drives me crazy. So, if your dad had been looking for you, he would have run into a wall.. My parents werent married when I was born, and my dad well, he wasnt so sure about the whole thing. ), more or less what then really happened in Humbug. Coming, dear. Sneaking up behind her and planting a kiss behind her ear. Back at the beginning, and, and even to this day, if he was honest with himself, Henrietta Lange had seemed a little otherworldly to him, a little magical, and a lot mysterious. Im good. Very early on, hed been a bit enamored of her. So why bother? And me, too. Yeah, but her excuse was that NCIS and LAPD kept getting in each others way. She herself had nearly been killed in Afghanistan because of some well-intentioned but covert machinations by Hetty. I dont know when it first occurred to me. Now go get dirty and smelly, Deeks, Callen smirked. All images copyright their respective owners, no infringement intended. Happy Valentines Day! I just think I know what you want a little better than you do, right now. How does your improvisation process work? What can we expect for Densi in BetterAngels? She could trust him in this as well. Yes, I am, Agent Deeks,Eric chimed in over comms. So she chose to be brief. I wanted to write them navigating a partnership, then a romantic relationship, then balancing family issues, having to make decisions and sacrifices that made sense for them as a married couple and a family, and then ultimately having to examine their professional desires with their love for each other and their family. But youd think a few fringe benefits would come with the new badge., Nono, no. No cars in the parking lot so get in there and locate those weapons.. but I have read some great ones on the FanFic sight and am amazed at how wonderful they do seem to work out together, Jericho Steele says. Special Agent Loki Laufeyson by Skylar Wittenborn 98.2K 4.3K 89 After the devastating invasion of New York, the war criminal Loki is being punished. Learn how your comment data is processed. Not after what theyd all just been through. Even though Sweet Lus Densi may not be getting married any time soon, they still are in a loving relationship. Maybe. Change), You are commenting using your Facebook account. No one knew better than Bertie what it had been like to live in the Brandel household. All of them, each member of the team, had been manipulated by Hetty, to one degree or another, for one reason or another. Marty Deeks Het Love Early on in their relationship, Deeks needs a little reassurance about her feelings and their relationship. -This is a family fanfic about Kensi Blye and Marty Deeks and their journey to become a family. We can fight the good fight, but not from the front lines. wikiDeeks is a non-profit fan site devoted to the character Marty Deeks of the hit CBS television show, NCIS: Los Angeles. The emotions and thought processes involved with jumping into a relationship can vary greatly, and I love exploring all the different ways it could happen., Jessica237 makes a distinction between what shed like to see on the show, and what she does with her Deeks and Kensi. Kensi shifted into an upright position, matching her husbands. He promised that their evening would make up for everything, and she had warned him that ithadbetter, which didnt make him happy at all. I didnt have to wonder who she was, or if she cared, or if she would just move on without me. I guess it turned out to be one, but it didnt feel like it at the time.. Theres nothing., Nothing, as in nothing. Roberta Deeks is one of TV"s most unique and memorable mothers. He realized that Sam had only ever spoken of his father, and wondered what that might mean about his unlikely friends relationship with his mother. Kensi could tell she still hadnt found the tender spot, so she probed again, mentally reviewing everything that had happened today when theyd met up with their mostly her- friends. Deeks and Kensi talk about her almost being blown up. Thanks, everyone, glad you enjoyed it, and I loved having the chance to visit with these very rich characters again. Or huge bouquet of flowerschampagneor strawberries dipped in chocolate?, Nobut I thought about it, he replied, as he stood back to watch her. When they shot you to get to me, and then you, Despite the gravity of their topic, Deeks grinned. And he hadnt shared any of it with his wife, for multiple reasons, but mostly because he didnt have to. Is Artie on a date or something? Sam asked with a slight grin. You really expect me to tell you that? Deeks shot back. I mean, it was so real, you know? Bickering. A particular aroma thats not appreciated at a romantic dinner? Callen said. Even with LAPD you worked under cover. Learn how your comment data is processed. Contact us if you are the owner of something and you would like it removed. But I just thought Maybe I didnt think enough. Wow, thats great! Well, all right, maybe some of it was about me. He described his friendship with Deeks and how supportive Deeks had been over the years, to the point of investing in his various - failed - business ventures. And he spent his alone with his mom. "Your father passed away in a auto accident in 1998, not long after his release from prison." Great way to end this series. I hadnt listed any family, no one as next of kin. Many more runs. But until this case, he hadnt been able to quite say why, or how. Or maybe not. She is first-date-only girl. Still, he was grateful for it. I like angst as long as there is a happy conclusion. If theyd turned away from her, who would they have turned to? All of these writers are terrific, but I have to tout my two favoritesthepixiemademedoit, who is such an elegant writer and Imahistorian whose current ongoing story Hold on Hope about a married Kensi and Deeks ten years down the line shows just how deep and far fan fiction can take us. The result of being too tired and miss reading the a tombstone at the end and it peculating till this came about. I love all the thoughts and insights. He loved her, in a strange way. Kensi laughed, moaning exaggeratedly after taking another sip of coffee. Copyright 2023 But was she ready? Maybe needy. Learn how your comment data is processed. Spot on! Its not like you have to shave. Or comb your hair. Not to mention that you did pretty much save Sams life. Hoping for a smile. Seen her maneuver people, seen her maneuver the truth. Is that it? Sounding incredulous, but noticing when the shadow came over his eyes. Thanks, Cladani. But he also kept a healthy distance, because he could. They both fell almost instantly in love. Meet Mr. Deeks. #Densi. So Deeks usually keep to himself and just agree with whoever he thinks it right. He couldnt help but give her a wry smile. You own a bar, but you barely drink. What do you most admire aboutDeeks? All theyd managed, so far, was a detente of sorts. What was your craziest day of filmingNCISLA? Choose Not To Use Archive Warnings, No Archive Warnings Apply, Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings (770), Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings, Evan "Buck" Buckley & Dan "Hondo" Harrelson, Mac + Old Friends + New Friends + Chair Force + Jack (EAD 2023), Jack Dalton & Angus MacGyver (MacGyver TV 2016), Sam Carter & Daniel Jackson & Jack O'Neill & Teal'c, Star Trek: Alternate Original Series (Movies), Original Bond Girl Characters (James Bond). He heard the tinge of excitement in her voice at the prospect of providing the children they didnt have with an extended family they also didnt have, and had to smile. (LogOut/ His father had been a violent drunk, whose actions had driven his only son to shoot him, in defense of the childs mother. To better understand who he really is and what motivates him, let's take a look . Deeks expects to be left alone, to never see the NCIS agents again. Could I? But, for the record, I do like our friends, and Im happy to spend time with them., And I love you for saying that and for a million other reasons.. But she still loved the woman, and she understood how Deeks could say he did as well. (And nice job with the no-spoiler description.). Ive often wondered if Hetty had told him the truth about his father, but I assumed the paperwork shed given him in the hospital was proof that his father was dead.